Hello readers,
Today we had another SLJ Task where we had to watch a video and think about what the characters would say without them saying anything.We basically we had to take our own words that would fit the Fishing friends and put it into a comic.The comic was about A Dude and his teeth fell out and it went into the water but then his mate started making fun of him.But then his mate Lets call him Bob Catched a huge fish and got his teeth out and put into the fish's mouth (these men are very old by the ways) Bob then showed his friend that lost his teeth but his friend ummm.... Pulled the teeth out of the fish's mouth and out it into his mouth he thought it was his Teeth but it wasent.
I really hope you enjoyed this and i would love some feedback Bye!!
Kia Ora Sapphire,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve done an amazing job captioning your images! I particularly like the expression you’ve used that matches the faces of the characters as well as your use of capital letters to convey loud thoughts! What a clever way to help your readers understand the tone of your comic!
If you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.
Perhaps you could increase the size of your post so your readers can better appreciate your comic. It would make it a bit easier to read.
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)